Lyric-wise, it's hard to get that balance of metaphorical vs understandable
Because I feel like every time I make my songs too metaphorical, people don't understand what the fuck I'm talking about so I have to dumb down my lyrics
And when I get straight to the point, people think it's too obvious
Because I feel like every time I make my songs too metaphorical, people don't understand what the fuck I'm talking about so I have to dumb down my lyrics
And when I get straight to the point, people think it's too obvious
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"So have a laugh with everyone but me" is such a gut punch.
I miss the brief time I was like "ah, it's self loathing" before realising it doesn't quite add up
But lyric writing while English is my second language is definitely something I need to work on and learn more...
Which lyrics are your favorite from my songs?
"
I've always thought that you were unaware
Of cliffs and canyons from below the air
I never knew that you have your own endless skies
So maybe I was ignorant
And you're not very different, after all"
From Mr. Sunfish idk tho it's hard to pick
Not sure
But maybe something like the verse from YJLPM
"Back then I listened to your voice 24/7, we were dancing through it all, dancing through it all/although I do miss the times we spent together, you're so 2020, You're just like Pop Music"
Though I feel guilty, don't return me to that avenue"
"It feels immoral that I celebrate alone
The relief is real
I'm freed from your embrace, oh darlin'"
That was the first I ever heard from you over the Winter, and those lyrics really stuck with me.
So have a laugh with everyone but me
So sing along, it's such a silly song
The cackling carousel, it spins and never stops
The acrobat who fell off from the top
They did a little drop!"
As the sort of person to laugh to cover up depression...
Yeah, that
They all seem too ordinary to me
--(snip)--
Everything seems normal
No need to be upset
Don't concern yourself with my unhappiness
'Cause I'm sure it's normal"
This hits hard, too; especially when you tell a funny story and folks look at you, horrified
obvious sometimes works really well to say what you mean with your whole heart
and I'd like to think it helps folks to know that there's others out there who feel something similar, and they're able to create awesome stuff
thanks <3
You’re just like pop music
Memory Merge
& Waterland
It's a comical yet devastating universe
But it's still the kind of universe that I deserve
The lipstick on my face has bled into my skin
It should show a grin
I've always thought that you were unaware
Of cliffs and canyons from below the air
I never knew that you have your own endless skies
"can i go ahead and surrender to the visions that i just can't remember"
Is..more complex than it sounds to me i dont know how to explain myself better sorry /ᐠ｡ꞈ｡ᐟ\
Just hits in the feels real good
For some reason hits hard for me, not sure why, maybe it cuz I think Convict deserves a bit more love ig
I just like your old music in general.
Memory Merge,
Another Mistake,
Bitter and Blunt,
I forgot that you exist
And You’re just like pop music
Kgjjgnsncnzf
"The past is all built on lies where one word could break it down."
"So why would you hold on til you break?"
"Am i wrong to want to walk with someone else?"
(The whole chorus of i forgot that you exist)
And
"You're so 2020"
Or were they pieces thrown around?
The past is all built on lies
Where one word could break it down" line again too
“The relief is real
I'm freed from your embrace, oh darlin'”
“Don't worry, it's not anything deep, I was feeling kinda reckless in thе nights I couldn't sleep”
It just flows so smoothly
I mean I wrote that song cringy on purpose but I’m surprised people enjoy it hahah
It's just feels true to me sometimes
"So, one, two, three
Would you agree that you're the only enemy?" And
"Without a clear confession
Nor an obsession
You took his heart
You have his full attention
You're an exception
Aren't you the luckiest of all?"
"I was feeling kinda reckless in the nights I couldn't sleep."
Though personally I think that all your songs have amazing lyrics
“Cause I have been on DND, Our message count is less than three”
“Less than three” = <3
I absolutely love the lyrics of Memory Merge as well! It’s amazing :D
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The whole thing
I like cheesy love songs
"'Cause I was torn undone
By your obsolete beliefs
Pretend as if we blend as one
But love us differently"
As someone who has a privileged identity in Indonesia, that lyric serves as a major, but deserved blow to the country.
"Please fulfil my youthfull prayers
before its far to late
Can you carry the smiles from the past?
And make them last..."
I mean the whole songs. They all have lyrics I heavily relate to in some way. (I miiiight need therapy)
That you were the one tormenting me
And in the year I thought this through and through
That I should be the one hating you
it's the only part of Fallacy i know off by heart and i love it (✿◡‿◡)
your choice of lyrics are always incredibly fun
And to wish you never tried
Isn't that what you call normal?"
Or basically anything from that song, when i discovered the song it hit really hard, and from time to time i hear those word come back to me
I know it may not be the most profound od lyrics but still