Sub27 A TM
QL: This looks good. Not much to do here.
F5: New story in a classic setting. Very on-brand but with a twist. Definitely has series potential. GMC for the MCs is not clear from the F5, but hey, you can't really go wrong with this premise.
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QL: This looks good. Not much to do here.
F5: New story in a classic setting. Very on-brand but with a twist. Definitely has series potential. GMC for the MCs is not clear from the F5, but hey, you can't really go wrong with this premise.
#RevPit #10Queries
Comments
QL: WC is on the low side. QL needs an overhaul.
F5: Interesting premise, describing the setup is quite wordy though. GMC not really obvious but hints at the MCs’ intentions. Definitely hints at adventure & shenanigans. I’d want to see how it ends for the MCs. Gimme!
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