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Fantasy Author, Worldbuilder, and Game Developer. I create worlds and stories. TikTok: https://www.tiktok.com/@worldofretallion?_t=ZP-8w4n5cxhO1f&_r=1
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In my story I have the Dyr. They are my take on Satyrs/Fauns they are half deer, with a variety in antler shapes and their eyes change color based on the seasons like irl caribou.

Do you have any nonhuman characters in your book? Tells us a bit about them and the role they play in the story! (Dwarves/elves/gnomes/etc fall under "humans" here, give me your aliens, your furries, your monsters) #WritingPrompt

Editing Progress update: 27/49 chapters completed 70k words down. #writerlife #writingcommunity #Writingfantasy

Live on tiktok www.tiktok.com/@worldofreta... #writingcommunity #writingsprint

Though tracking of my time it seems I can write at about 700 words an hour and edit at about 1000 an hour. All this tells me is how quickly I could finish my book if I didn’t have a job…

No writing done today, but I feel ready to tackle more revisions tomorrow. #writerlife #writingcommunity

At the bottom of the abyss all his failures were as clear as the daylight he abandoned. #microfiction #photography #writingcommunity

Standing alone amongst ancient rock and stone. The majesty of a place settles into your bones. #landscapephotography #Microfiction #writingcommunity

Time to start writing for the night! #writingcommunity #fantasy #writersky

Chapter 25 draft 3 done. A net gain of 300 words gave some meat to a pretty lean chapter. Now over 50% of the way through my manuscript. 65k words done. #writersky #fantasy #writingcommunity

The lacy falls cascaded down the hillside to join the swift flowing river. The spring he sought was almost in reach. #microfiction #landscapephotography #waterfall #writingcommunity

One of my favorite lines from my WIP’s latest chapter. “but there may come a time when keeping your head and keeping your head are at odds and the only thing you can do is commit.” #Writersky #fastasywriter #writingcommunity

24/49 chapters revised in my WIP. It’s sitting at just over 63k words. This week I’m going to be streaming my writing sprints over on TikTok. We’ll see how that goes.

The heat of the day could not reach the canyon floor. Its steep walls a shield and a prison. #microfiction #landscapephotography #writingcommunity

Finished my 3rd draft pass on chapter 24 today. Net gain of 600 words. It includes my spiciest scene yet… MMC held FMC’s hand to comfort her… #writingcommunity #slowburn #writingfantasy #writersky

Morning light caressed the rocky peaks as still waters reflected the glacier where it hung on the mountainside.  #microfiction #photography #landscapephotography #writingcommunity #writersky #mountains #glacier #sunrise

The valley was silent as fog chokes the majestic trees. It settled over the land like a heavy blanket. #microfiction #photography #landscapephotography #fog #forest #writersky #writingcommunity

Clouds broke and a mountain emerged, tall and imperious, an impassable wall of stone. #microfiction #photography #landscapephotography #writingcommunity #writersky

My MC Verdell seeks freedom out of fear. “You don’t get it. This has been looming over my head for years. Why do you think I always managed to slip away when I could. I don’t want to spend my life hovering over ledgers and shipping manifests.” #Writingcommunity #writingfantasy #writersky

Winter transforms everything. A once green and lush forest now still and silent as the grave. #microfiction #photography #landscapephotography #WA #writingcommunity #writersky

A couple of years ago I got the opportunity to spend a week in the Canadian Rockies. It was a #photography trip I’ll never forget. #landscapephotography #mountain #glacier #sunrise

My goals for this month are to keep to the pace of 2 chapter revisions a week to reach the halfway mark in my story. I also want to connect with more writers in my genre here on #writersky #writingfantasy #goals

Revised half a chapter today with a next gain of about 200 words. My favorite line I added “They looked almost peaceful. Like they were sleeping and only moments from waking. Their unmoving chests shattered that illusion.” #writingfantasy #writingcommunity #writersky #death #fantasy

Going live on Twitch, working on my 3rd draft. Join me for a 1 hour writing sprint! Write along or come and chat www.twitch.tv/thorshand11?... #writingcommunity #writingfantasy #livestreaming #writingsprint #writersky

“Details can wait, right now you need to eat.” Oraen, the older Dyr said. Resting a paternal hand on Kitha’s shoulder he continued. “Kitha, would you get a mug of stew for this young man?” Pangs of hunger echoed the pain in his side. Could he trust any food they gave him? Did he have a choice?

Two of the places I’m stealing from my home state for my #fantasy world are Rainier and the rocky pacific coast. #photography by me. #landscapephotography #writersky #writingcommunity