Here's my offering today for #wordsunsaid #poemsabout @brokenspinearts.bsky.social - ThreadSky

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davidbirch.bsky.social • 3 days ago

Here's my offering today for #wordsunsaid #poemsabout @brokenspinearts.bsky.social

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Wow, love this! "the sting and snag of uphill gorse"; "words are tugged away...on moorland gusts" - and the ending more furious than passive aggressive....👏👏

davidbirch.bsky.social•1 day ago

Thank you! Very kind of you

alanparry83.bsky.social•3 days ago

The contrast between the wild, unspeakable beauty of the moors and the quiet restraint of words unsaid is so well crafted. That half invitation, half regret lingers like the wind on the hilltop. Absolutely stunning. #KeepWriting #PoemsAbout #WordsUnsaid

davidbirch.bsky.social•3 days ago

Thank you very much, Alan. The opportunity to share work here and enjoy others' is much appreciated 👏

rburrows.bsky.social•3 days ago

Yes! Exactly! 👏👏👏

hool415.bsky.social•2 days ago

This no doubt entailed sturdy climbing but what I love most is the shoulder shrug of the ending. Lovely!

davidbirch.bsky.social•2 days ago

Thank you - much appreciated. Yes, I guess the ending is a touch passive-aggressive when I think about it now...

lozzawriting.bsky.social•3 days ago

I love this. Something raw about that unshared experience that feels quite lonely. There's a sparseness here you've captured well.

davidbirch.bsky.social•3 days ago

Thank you!

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