i started editing my tender mechsploitation drama inspired by dolls, angels, Warhound, and hicuckomori from 17,000 words and somehow ended up with 20,000+ and someone getting their brains blown out with a lot of fucking in-between archiveofourown.org/works/56524519 - ThreadSky

poppyhaze.bsky.social • 8 days ago

i started editing my tender mechsploitation drama inspired by dolls, angels, Warhound, and hicuckomori from 17,000 words and somehow ended up with 20,000+ and someone getting their brains blown out with a lot of fucking in-between

https://archiveofourown.org/works/56524519

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ars-synthetica.bsky.social•8 days ago

damn. that was good

poppyhaze.bsky.social•8 days ago

Thank you and you’re a quick reader

ars-synthetica.bsky.social•8 days ago

it was gripping! few works compel me on like that. the dynamic between the two main characters was great. the action was fantastic, felt very grounded. constant tension and drama. glad it had a happy enough ending ;v;

poppyhaze.bsky.social•8 days ago

i joked with another writing friend that i've essentially did an in-out motion with the action/sex scenes is basically the same motion in sex

yuriposting.bsky.social•3 days ago

this was really lovely, I enjoyed the dynamic between Lakshmi and Wedge very much. the ebb and flow, and the finding each other amidst military service. really vivid and grounded. really really good

poppyhaze.bsky.social•3 days ago

Thank you, ive ravenous for feedback so I appreciate it

laughingcorvus.bsky.social•8 days ago

sounds like a fun time

poppyhaze.bsky.social•7 days ago

you can read it, for free, on the internet

petswem.bsky.social•7 days ago

incredible. thank you 😊

poppyhaze.bsky.social•3 days ago

also I’m kinda like a masochist but instead of like wrapping myself in a rug and lying down at gay bars so people step on me, I just want feedback. So don’t be afraid of giving me feedback much like you should not be afraid of stepping on rug guy

poppyhaze.bsky.social•8 days ago

There is only very light bondage in one scene, if there's anything here, it's the inescapable dread of knowing you were manufactured, puppeted even as you puppet others, but even if I am on strings, can I at least be proud I danced well?

nequals1.bsky.social•8 days ago

Those last two clauses go incredibly hard, even in a vacuum. Really nice work.

poppyhaze.bsky.social•8 days ago

Thank you

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