Bold choice way to set the tone for the book. Weather it’s permanent or not doesn’t matter as long as it has real consequences for the characters in the book. Can’t wait to see where this goes.
Shocking but I love how you have made Cobra the terrifying threat that it should be. Going up against them should cause Joes to sweat, not act like it’s another day at the office.
I think it’s more shocking with a big name like R&R but also remember that every Joe is someone’s favorite, so no matter what a reader is going to be angry.
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Or you are making him into a cyborg.
Either is a bold choice.
He has so much that could be flushed out… music, surfing, big guns, and a good friend of Clutch.