It was a bit of an experiment and I admit I was a little torn about that. I debated making it a bit simpler or adding some more explanation. I settled on keeping it as is because I wondered if it might immerse people in the confusion or lack of sense that Tim was feeling.
Honestly it's not a bad thing I was lost, sometimes having to put myself in the boots of a certain profession can be more engaging. I think your readers who know you are a pilot will appreciate it more for the insider information.
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