For example, imagine the following picture book text:
"'Today, we lunch in the tub,' cried the king, as his servants spread out a sumptious (if soggy) spread of sweets and savories."
That's solid line. It paints a vivid picture. But what if we let the picture paint the picture, instead?
"'Today, we lunch in the tub,' cried the king, as his servants spread out a sumptious (if soggy) spread of sweets and savories."
That's solid line. It paints a vivid picture. But what if we let the picture paint the picture, instead?
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