Some feedback I got on the first chapter of my WIP from an industry professional amounted to, "Tell us in these initial pages why the person who had something horrible happen to them deserved it," and like, buddy, *that's the whole book*.
How about if he said: ‘Boy, I sure do love this sledge I’ve called Rosebud. I wonder if it will become the defining symbol of my life in many years to come in this movie we are making’
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