The villain needs to be introduced earlier, the memory alterations need to be more clearly delineated, the sex scenes need to be streamlined, and the main romantic interest needs to have more agency.
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#Febredit day 14: Give an example of something you needed to revise for (eg the MC needed more agency, the antagonist needed to be more evil, etc)
I recently had to revise a story because the passive and active characters were swapped lol. I'm not swapping them back, but i need to lean in to that
I recently had to revise a story because the passive and active characters were swapped lol. I'm not swapping them back, but i need to lean in to that
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