Dear professor
I bow to your greater knowledge on composition but… no way does squirrel rhyme with world, which I believe is the last word in the actual verse.
Have you written many songs? Is the one in question one of yours?
I bow to your greater knowledge on composition but… no way does squirrel rhyme with world, which I believe is the last word in the actual verse.
Have you written many songs? Is the one in question one of yours?
Sorry, on second thoughts the poet in me is very disturbed at how you lost the rhythm in the last line and the word ‘squirrel’ doesn’t bloody-well rhyme!
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