A three-parts poem dedicated to my two granmas I didn’t get to see… two very contrasting personalities. #poemsabout #roots @brokenspinearts.bsky.social @alanparry83.bsky.social #poetsofsky #blueskypoets #poetrycommunity #poems #poetry #writingcommunity Thank you for reading it. - ThreadSky

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social • 9 days ago

A three-parts poem dedicated to my two granmas I didn’t get to see… two very contrasting personalities.
#poemsabout
#roots
@brokenspinearts.bsky.social
@alanparry83.bsky.social

#poetsofsky #blueskypoets
#poetrycommunity #poems
#poetry #writingcommunity

Thank you for reading it.

Comments

johnchmura.bsky.social•9 days ago

The way the third part tethers.

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•9 days ago

Thank you for reading the long poem and commenting. Much appreciated! 🙏
I was first in double minds whether to include part III
Glad you liked it.

johnchmura.bsky.social•9 days ago

If we were working it in my group, I think the consensus would be that all of the questions in the first two parts find resolution in the third.

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•9 days ago

Thank you!

koelh.bsky.social•9 days ago

Beautiful 🤍

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•9 days ago

Thank you so much🙏😊

alanparry83.bsky.social•9 days ago

Love how the structure mirrors the contrasts—stone vs. dew, grit vs. surrender. The questioning rhythm pulls the reader into this push-and-pull of identity and fate, and that last section? Feels like everything dissolves into something bigger. Really clever! #KeepWriting #PoemsAbout #Roots

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•8 days ago

Thank you for your wonderful comment. Glad that the three sections are cohesive.
Really appreciate your taking time to a detail feedback on every piece.

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•7 days ago

Thanks
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for the repost. Greatly appreciated. 🙏😊