I could finally come up with a new poem for this prompt #WolvesAtTheDoor #PoemsAbout So here it is, no.2 for @alanparry83.bsky.social @brokenspinearts.bsky.social #blueskypoets #BlueskyPoetry #poetrycommunity #poetry #writingcommunity Thanks for reading. Have a lovely day. - ThreadSky

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social • 2 days ago

I could finally come up with a new poem for this prompt #WolvesAtTheDoor #PoemsAbout
So here it is, no.2 for
@alanparry83.bsky.social
@brokenspinearts.bsky.social

#blueskypoets #BlueskyPoetry
#poetrycommunity
#poetry #writingcommunity
Thanks for reading. Have a lovely day.

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johnchmura.bsky.social•2 days ago

Turning several phrases on their heads, excellent!

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•2 days ago

Thank you! I seriously thought I’ll let go this prompt, but this came last evening, knocking…😅 So glad you like it.

softlywild.bsky.social•2 days ago

I love your playful yet sinister tone. “Or worse they might crawl” is an unsettling blend of humour and horror. Great write 💫

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•2 days ago

Thanks a lot! Enjoyed writing this piece.
Shall catch up on your and other pieces later 👋

uhume.bsky.social•10 hours ago

lighthearted and ominous!

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•3 hours ago

Thank you for reading! Really appreciate your comment. 😊

carmellapoetry.bsky.social•1 day ago

'Let me assure you bunny moons, it's not spiced with sin..' lovely melodic rhythms in this!

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•1 day ago

Thank you so much 🙏. Glad you liked that part. Had first written “bunnies of moon”, then replaced it…

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alanparry83.bsky.social•2 days ago

‘You’d rather prefer my bones?’ is wicked & brilliant; bite showing behind polite humour. The tension simmers under that ladle. Fairy tale meets threat. Served hot! #KeepWriting #PoemsAbout #WolvesAtTheDoor

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•1 day ago

Yesss! Baba Yaga is supposed to be wicked… but she gave my childhood sleepless nights in those Russian fairy tales ; so I thought of giving her a pleasing attendant 😅. Thank you for this great feedback. 🙏

rburrows.bsky.social•2 days ago

There’s so much in this - I love it! Now I shall read it again - and again. 🥰

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•1 day ago

Thank you! Enjoy 😉 🙏💫

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•3 hours ago

Thank you so much for the repost!
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owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•22 hours ago

Thank you so much for the repost!
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gphydeauthor.bsky.social•17 hours ago

You're most welcome!

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•1 day ago

So grateful for all the likes and reposts 🙏😊

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owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•1 day ago

So grateful for all the likes and reposts 🙏😊
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hool415.bsky.social•2 days ago

Can you take off your sensitive skins!
Unsettling yet rather clever too.
Nice!

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•1 day ago

Thank you so much 🙏. Sometimes like beauty our sensitivity is skin-deep 😅

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hool415.bsky.social•1 day ago

Very true!

merrildsmith.bsky.social•1 day ago

I like the conversational tone mixed with the unsettling images--Baba Yaga cooking something I'd rather not know about!

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•1 day ago

Thank you! I didn’t ask her either; safer to steer clear of her wrath 😂

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merrildsmith.bsky.social•1 day ago

You're welcome! Very wise! 😂

poetryman1.bsky.social•1 day ago

That last line raised the hairs on my neck too!! 👍

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•1 day ago

Thank you for your comment! And sorry about that experience! 🙏😁

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poetryman1.bsky.social•21 hours ago

No problem!😳

janpsolivagant.bsky.social•2 days ago

😁💫

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•1 day ago

🙌🙏☺️

thepaulconnolly.bsky.social•1 day ago

Russian folk tale or Mussorgsky-like dark humour. Great fun

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•1 day ago

Oh! That’s a great compliment! Thank you, glad you enjoyed reading; I enjoyed writing it.

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davidbirch.bsky.social•2 days ago

Love the tone of this. Playful spiced with sinister...

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•1 day ago

Thank you so much 🙏. Glad you like it

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gphydeauthor.bsky.social•1 day ago

Excellent how this piece captures the mood of a macabre fairy tale - enticing but at the same time repulsive.👏👏👏

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•1 day ago

Thank you so much! Let’s hope as in fairy tales Baba Yaga is frightful but also a softie😁

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andywilliamson.com•1 day ago

'spiced with sin' is such a strong phrase, works so well... then 'taking of our sensitive skin' works for me on so many levels, brilliant!

owlnsquirrels1111.bsky.social•1 day ago

Thank you so much for your generous appreciation. Feels great. 🙏😊

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