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kariktheoutlaw69.bsky.social • 55 days ago

Alright, I've got the first short story done! I need opinions lol

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kariktheoutlaw69.bsky.social•55 days ago

Last bit

dutterfly.bsky.social•53 days ago

I think if red don't want to see someone he love die he should sacrifice himself

kariktheoutlaw69.bsky.social•53 days ago

So actually, Red is technically dead, he's kinda like a ghost that everyone can see and interact with! And he did that for someone he loved a long time ago and not only did he lose his life, but he lost everyone he ever knew around him. So he's seen this before and is trying to change their fates!

dutterfly.bsky.social•53 days ago

Ok i don't know how he can save them gooooood story

kariktheoutlaw69.bsky.social•53 days ago

All of the Snik's have a very complex story and I have yet to figure out how to put it on paper yet, so I apologize for the confusion, but thank u! At some point each Snik will have a little bit of a story to tell who they are, how they died, etc

dutterfly.bsky.social•54 days ago

I mean the first page

kariktheoutlaw69.bsky.social•54 days ago

Ah, well the 5 screenshots are the whole short story! It's really short and I'm trying to get back into writing so I apologize for the poor story telling lol

dutterfly.bsky.social•55 days ago

Where the first one

kariktheoutlaw69.bsky.social•55 days ago

Where's the other ones I've done?

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