there is a lot of misrepresentation/completely incorrect things both here and in the piece itself. the outfit does vaguely resemble a straitjacket, even if not intentional. this reinforces the stereotype of psych patients being dangerous as well as other things.
additionally, it seems you are trying to add hallucinations & dissociative alters to the mix too. that in and of itself is fine, but you NEED to do research for these things. dissociative alters aren’t just “alternate personalities”, they stem from severe trauma, & it seems like that was not taken—
—into consideration here. the hallucinations COULD be fine, but with what you’ve given, this could be dangerous & feed into stereotypes if he starts interacting with them, depending on how they’re portrayed.
both of those + the straitjacket-like outfit heavily feed into negative stereotypes about people w/mental health issues who need hospitalization being “insane”.
absolutely no hate to the art—your art here is great! but please take these things into account when creating a character like this
additionally, this might just be a personal ick, but he IS a real person & I think it’s a little weird to do anything psychiatric like this with him because of that.
all of this is just my two cents, but I am a system who experiences hallucinations myself so I feel like my words have weight here
this remark is also a little iffy & teetering on the edge of being ableist imho
(also, just something to note, but if Joe is working w/cdot, he likely wouldn’t be working w/Jonny. doctors specialize, & the only reason I can think of him being near both is him being an emergency room doctor.)
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absolutely no hate to the art—your art here is great! but please take these things into account when creating a character like this
all of this is just my two cents, but I am a system who experiences hallucinations myself so I feel like my words have weight here
(also, just something to note, but if Joe is working w/cdot, he likely wouldn’t be working w/Jonny. doctors specialize, & the only reason I can think of him being near both is him being an emergency room doctor.)