Next writerly question is adjective, adjective noun construct. Do you do it, pick one, add an ‘and,’ omit the comma, or figure something else out? e.g.,
She glared at her clever, unkind husband.
She glared at her clever and unkind husband.
She glared at her clever unkind husband.
She glared at her clever, unkind husband.
She glared at her clever and unkind husband.
She glared at her clever unkind husband.
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“clever unkind” feels awkward as if clever is trying to modify unkind but was stripped of its adverbial -ly. 😂