This is wonderful. Thancred’s voice is so perfect, old beyond his years and so young and vulnerable at the same time. His protective instincts are in full force already. Loved it!
This is so so lovely and wonderfully captures his younger self, not yet fully formed, I think so often about how hands-off but persistently protective he is of the twins and this matches the vibes the text gives us so perfectly
this is such a beautiful work. the way you were able to explore not only thancred’s relationship with the leveilleur family but also his struggles and efforts within this new society is so special
(dont look at my first post! there be spoilers!!!)
This is perfect!! Thancred expressing himself in the best way he knows without caring about the repercussions for the briefest of moments shows how much he cares about the twins, and Ameliance seeing that and responding!! You wrote them well!!
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(dont look at my first post! there be spoilers!!!)