Beautiful.There are lots of delicious images and ideas but my favourites are:
"moth's wing in the path of a storm" and "...folded your memory into the hem of a passing thought."
I lost a partner to suicide some 35 years ago sand this poem represents a state to which I aspire.
Rachel… that you can create poetry from such pain, that so many people experience but can’t describe…
It’s a profound witnessing that you offer with your gift of weaving language. Transforming darkness into light. 🙏🏼✨
Thank you Amy, for seeing the depth of my words and understanding the pain that often fuels them. It's a privilege to be able to give voice to emotions that others may struggle to express. I'm grateful for the opportunity to transform darkness into light, even if it's just a small beacon of hope. 💫
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such a moving poem of time spent out
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Hope you’ll see a rainbow with new colours soon, though.
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"moth's wing in the path of a storm" and "...folded your memory into the hem of a passing thought."
I lost a partner to suicide some 35 years ago sand this poem represents a state to which I aspire.
It’s a profound witnessing that you offer with your gift of weaving language. Transforming darkness into light. 🙏🏼✨