: ) I work as a fiction editor. Here are some tips that might help? Be careful to show vs. tell when describing sensations so the reader can inhabit the protagonist. Match word choice to the heat level of the scene. Match heat level of scene to build-up in the story. And ensure explicit consent.
I have no problem teaching all my editing clients how to write their sex scenes. You set the scene up, then you center three astrix on the page, like this: ".* * *" and then you start the NEXT scene after. Let the reader fill in the action. Only way to ensure reaction to one's scene isn't "eww".
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