i've seen too many tech talks/presos that suffer from a few totally fixable issues, and decided to write about it:
https://gpfault.net/posts/gripes-with-presos.txt.html
https://gpfault.net/posts/gripes-with-presos.txt.html
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My pet peeve: lack of narrative. "We did x/y/z" and going into details.
C'mon, I am at a conference watching 10+ talks a day, I will not remember those details, and mostly don't care.
Give me something to remember, a "story".
A lot of GDC-style game tech talks are terrible, sorry. Repeating the same stuff (with tiny tricks) over and over. Those should have been blog posts/tweets.
His solution was slides with one or two sentences on, then when he showed a new slide he'd just pause and be quiet for 30 seconds to allow everyone to read it.
When I make slides I’m also usually thinking of the many people that will download them after.
Start from an outline and never write down an exact speech also helps the "read from the script" problem, which I agree is not good. I'd much rather have "ums" and "uhs" than stiff recital. If you're nervous it might help to have a written script for practice though
(I spent ~40 hours making slides & rehearsing my one GDC talk)
I don't talk about diction issues and you highlight the care to be had when making jokes more.
If you're curious: http://mathspp.com/blog/how-i-prepare-a-technical-talk
I think the main difference is that at the bottom I share some notes on how I typically prepare the content for my own talks.
The TLDR is: a lot of time thinking, then writing a blog post, then making slides.
Rehearsals are good but a lot of times I find people take them to the “read from the script” extreme. I personally find these just as bad; just give me the slides then.