For #PoemsAbout #BonesofTrust, here is Latch. Great to see this becoming bigger each week. Well done to @alanparry83.bsky.social @brokenspinearts.bsky.social for creating this burgeoning space - looking forward to reading others - ThreadSky

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paulwritespoems.bsky.social • 9 days ago

For #PoemsAbout #BonesofTrust, here is Latch.

Great to see this becoming bigger each week. Well done to @alanparry83.bsky.social @brokenspinearts.bsky.social for creating this burgeoning space - looking forward to reading others

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kakapowhakatoi.bsky.social•9 days ago

I felt the burning in every line and then the ending was a proper slap! Great work!

gabrielbauman.com•9 days ago

Whoever the subject is should take these verses hard. But I know the type, and they aren’t capable of seeing themselves for what they are.

Solidarity. Sharp work.

paulwritespoems.bsky.social•9 days ago

Thank you. And your analysis of the person is 100% accurate

thepopper.bsky.social•9 days ago

The broken bones of trust?

alanparry83.bsky.social•9 days ago

This is brutal in the best way: sharp, deliberate, packed with quiet rage. Love how the shepherd’s crook shifts from support to sacrifice to betrayal. Cutting last line. Brilliant work. #KeepWriting #PoemsAbout #BonesOfTrust

paulwritespoems.bsky.social•9 days ago

Thanks for reading and your considered analysis - these prompts are challenging me each week🙏

drnaturegirl.bsky.social•9 days ago

Felt the stab of this, Paul. Great stuff!

shadesofgreen.bsky.social•9 days ago

This is so good, Paul!!!!

paulwritespoems.bsky.social•9 days ago

Thank you so much Susan, really appreciate that 🙏

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