Mostly pov I think. It’s just not coming through on the page the way it is in my head. “The vibes are off” is the only way I can think to describe it lol
Oh wow, yeah. "Off vibes." This just happened to me while drafting a short story in third omniscient. If it helps you at all, I decided to write a short scene in first person. From that perspective, I realized how to fix the vibe issue in third. I hope you solve the puzzle!
Thanks! I will try anything at this point so I’ll try your POV trick. Once I eventually stumble upon the thing that feels right it will fall together! Just gotta find what feels right 😂
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