This is how I'm thinking I'll approach this in future, eg
Did the flow feel seamless or were there points where the narrative jumped?
Are there any places where the text assumes knowledge which you the reader do not have?
Is there anything we want to add from a strategic level which is missing?
Did the flow feel seamless or were there points where the narrative jumped?
Are there any places where the text assumes knowledge which you the reader do not have?
Is there anything we want to add from a strategic level which is missing?
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Each time you stop reading mark where and jot down why you stopped. What stories are similar to this? Did you want more of any scene? Any scenes you hoped to see but didn’t? Which characters were most/least real for you? Why?