I tried so hard to fit in a final paragraph from Maisie’s perspective but I couldn’t figure out what else to cut! Agggh. (I mean, I could just break the entirely self-imposed rule of 500 words, but the point is to learn these lessons.)
https://open.substack.com/pub/leeronheywood/p/captured-confession
https://open.substack.com/pub/leeronheywood/p/captured-confession
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