daveashleypoet.bsky.social
Poet, Story Teller, all round good egg
https://daveashley.co.uk/about-me/
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This is wonderful matey
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If it rains wet paper goes into rocks crevices. Then when dry and further goes through expansion and contraction. Killing rock. Laughing at rock. Paper is a psychopathic bastard playing the long game. Beware of paper!
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It's weird I make specimens when people make jar sounds near me. It's not cute and I think I should see the doctor
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Alright James. That made me smile. I cant get the life of Brian out of my head today. It's almost as if I should follow someone with a gourd, or a shoe
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Honest addresses the fact that there is concerted effort to talk about "racism to cis white males" which is just plainly wrong and shows the level of white privilege in society. I'll get off my soap box now.
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Loved the poem vona. It had a really great feel to it
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Steven I love the use of dead man's voyage... then lower down rectus grin.. just really works well
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Thanks I'm now laughing at Etymology. Best go write again.
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I always thought poet meant hopelessly addicted to caffeine, juggler of words, often points at clouds screaming...
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I just write and it looks like I've put thought into it. I pretend I have. I'm a pseudo poet really 😅
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Lovely, really emotive. Made me proper smile matey
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Simple and yet very poignant. Love it
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Nice
I can see the use of enjambment in this and ir really bloody works. Damn good poem. Made me smile at the way it's crafted
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Well done Hannah
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Erm
Pardon?
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The use of sibilant sounds in this add weight to the sea theme. Bloody good writing
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I think this has an honesty to it. It's really good free form with nice imagery. Keep going you are really talented
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Silvery moonlight.... that is lovely. A lot of texture
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I bet it seems to feel natural almost as if you didn't need to edit it much. Anyway hats off to you, sir!
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Blimey John. That is really good mate. Word choices are immaculate
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That's clever. A good lamenting of the humble American (soon to be extinct) penny
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I love commenting on poetry, especially when it 'speaks'to me. You've got a good talent there.
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Lisa, this really evocative. Love it
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That is superb mate
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Whoop ragggh. And other associated dino noises!