The extremely corny midsection almost had me feeling down, but the end swooped in to rekindle my interest. I'm feeling pretty good about the direction things are going
I'd agree if they didn't feel the need to have a rushed emotional revelation for Koana in there.
"Hey guys did I mention my parents abandoned me? They suck."
*5 minutes later*
"Wait... My parents... Loved me...???"
It felt out of place, and a bit... idk, infantile?
Not that I *want* to be a hater
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"Hey guys did I mention my parents abandoned me? They suck."
*5 minutes later*
"Wait... My parents... Loved me...???"
It felt out of place, and a bit... idk, infantile?
Not that I *want* to be a hater
Also, ShB patches redux as the B plot, how about that?
THINGS ARE HAPPENING!
And I for one am, for now, unsure what I should think about the things that are happening.