examples for two points of the spectrum:
honkai star rail: bullet points are fine, presentation (game specifically rpg format) is dogshit, turns out okay
chainsaw man: bullet points are messy at best, presentation rocks and gets so many style points that it somehow works out
honkai star rail: bullet points are fine, presentation (game specifically rpg format) is dogshit, turns out okay
chainsaw man: bullet points are messy at best, presentation rocks and gets so many style points that it somehow works out
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kai
something a lot of people need to learn is that great stories are not defined by a list of bullet points of "what happens" and if what happens is good then the story is good.
presentation is 50% at minimum!
presentation is 50% at minimum!
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one piece is good because there's a balance of good bullet points and great presentation