I like this. A whole story in a few words, all indirect but spot on. The picture is clear.
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Griff Roberts
At the trough
Cracked pumpkin
lost its seeds
long, long ago,
but tail-twitchers
jealously #guard it
from flittering fliers
looking for a break
from the suet.
When they all
are away at night
rats slip in to scratch
out a morsel or two
before #turning
into the bleakness.
#poetry #vsspoem #vss365
Cracked pumpkin
lost its seeds
long, long ago,
but tail-twitchers
jealously #guard it
from flittering fliers
looking for a break
from the suet.
When they all
are away at night
rats slip in to scratch
out a morsel or two
before #turning
into the bleakness.
#poetry #vsspoem #vss365
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