I CANT IM UGLY CRYING THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND PAINFUL AND AW MAN IT MAKES MY HEATS CLENCH SO MUCH AND OH MY GOD THE GORGEOUS ART AND HUUUUUHHHHH ALL MY FEELS MAN I CANT DEAL WITH THIS WHAT IS EVEN LIFE AND HOW DO I GO ON FROM HERE AHHHHHH
This is a freakin masterpiece, I'm especially going insane over the dialogue!!! "Are you awake now" perfectly establishing that dreamlike feel, "I know four languages" asfdfg 😂, the recurring "perfect", "we've done all our best dreaming together" 😭😭😭 Beautiful!!!
god this entire comic is so unspeakably beautiful. the way youve designed the layouts feels so intimate and interactive, like the mood on each panel is expertly enhancing what comes next and making the intimacy or shock all the more powerful when it happens. its own kind of magic tbh
i want to reread this over and over the yearning is so good the desperation is all over the place i love how jayce's eyes are this repeated turning point motif ahhhhh my babies 😭😭🫶
Man I've come back to this several times now it's gutting me. The flashbacks(forwards?) Viktor has while in the dream, poor jayce so worried when he wakes up 😭 Viktor just trying to process how fortunate he is aaAAAA
BONES you're here loving them it's amazing, this comic completely destroys me IT'S SO PERFECTLY DONE OMG "we've done all our best dreaming together" I'm jumping out the window 😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩
You said happy valentines I say thank you for making me tear up and emotional for the next 100 years at least
What a beautiful comic, your writing is really really good!!
I FOLLOW YOU, AND THIS IS THE FIRST THING I READ??!!! OUGHHH, I'M IN FOR SOME QUALITY CONTENT HERE <3 genuinely beautiful, especially the colouring- I love how you draw them :]
The first couple of pages put me on the edge, the moment Jayce asked Viktor about his writing omg
And the ART AAAAAAAA❤️❤️❤️
Thank you for happy ending for this!❤️❤️❤️😤👍✨️❤️❤️❤️
I come back to reread this comic all the time and still find things to gasp about, details I missed, I only Juat recently saw the outfit change, but now I'm noticing after V sees Jayces future, Jayce references losing his mind and V Hesitating before responded, a new thing to scream over :'0
this is so beautiful and SO romantic (I think, at least), I love the panels of their sideways faces looking at each other, they just do things to my heart, thank you for this Valentine
“We’ve done all our best dreaming together” is still my favorite line
But so is Viktor kneeling in all white
That’s such a powerful use of negative space man what a panel
This is fantastic, the story is beautiful but I also want to compliment the artwork itself!! Your style is gorgeous, I love how you draw faces and your grasp on anatomy is lovely! 💕
OH MY GODDD YOU TOOK ME BY SURPRISE I WASNT EXPECTING THIS AT ALL UNTIL LIKE PART 3 😭😭 The emotions snd storyboarding as so good, the expressions and their tender touches. This is such a wonderful comic and i truly love it. Thank you for creating it!!
Oh my god... Wo. I've been reading this comic over and over. I can't get enough of every panel. It hit me like a truck, so beautiful and emotional and powerful. Thank you so much for making it 🥹
this is so beautiful i had to wait til i was more awake to write a comment but oh my god this had me on my knees. the meeting gazes. the flashbacks. the palette swap when he finally wakes up. AUGH MY HEART
Oh 😭 I’m 😭 I’m Okay 😭😭😭 AUGH I caught Jayce’s outfit change between pages 3 and 4 and went OH. OH I’M GOING TO CRY AREN’T I!! AND I DID!!!! I AM CRYING BUT IT’S A GOOD CRY!!!!!! THIS IS SO SWEET!!!! The dialogue is *chefs kiss* oh my god Viktor seeking out comfort from Jayce even in dreams.
The little details that become slowly more and more obvious as you continue reading that something isn’t quite right. COLOR SHIFT FROM DREAM TO AWAKE!!!! The parallels to Viktor actually waking up to all the times he “woke up” in his dream. I- WAHHHHH!!!! God Everything about this is Perfect 💖💖💖
This is incredibly inspiring! Your work with layout is absolutely fantastic. The pacing, the angles, the atmosphere, the gestures. Not to mention your style by itself. This is a gem I didn't know I needed in my life! Thank you for sharing! <3
Will need to keep an eye out for the printed version! <3
The shift in colors when Viktor woke up was such a relief. I felt so suffocated in those first panels even though most of them represent the memories that Viktor surely always long for and treasuring. But the ghosts of the past are alway ready to swallow him and I understand that deeply.
Your sense of pacing and the motion, and laying out each page! I'm just ENAMORED and can't stop looking at each one! There are SO many wonderfully subtle pieces of body language in even the 'mundane' panels that make the actions just feel so much MORE, and I think it's because of your excellent
skill in angles and the... I forget the comic equivalent of 'cinematogrophy'.... maybe that's just panel layout. I'm out of touch with comics terms.
Then I saw that you're the artist for Youth Group and had a fangirl moment. This comic is so good! 💖
Aaaah thank you so much!! Comics are very similar storytelling wise to cinema so I personally think the terminology is interchangeable. I really appreciate how thoughtful your engagement with this comic was, it’s so rewarding 💚💚💚💚
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Absolutely gorgeous comic
I’ll die this was so beautiful it’s killed me 🩷😭🥹💘💓💞💗 thank you thank you for sharing this beautiful comic with us ❣️
What a beautiful comic, your writing is really really good!!
❤️❤️❤️😭
The first couple of pages put me on the edge, the moment Jayce asked Viktor about his writing omg
And the ART AAAAAAAA❤️❤️❤️
Thank you for happy ending for this!❤️❤️❤️😤👍✨️❤️❤️❤️
I love love LOVE the overlaid storytelling you did here!!
What a comic, holy cow. I am blown away!!
But so is Viktor kneeling in all white
That’s such a powerful use of negative space man what a panel
And I love Viktor’s quip about knowing four languages eheheheheh 😆🥰🫰🏼
Will need to keep an eye out for the printed version! <3
Then I saw that you're the artist for Youth Group and had a fangirl moment. This comic is so good! 💖