cirpoemel.bsky.social
I am a non-native speaker of English, but let me write poems using English words here, because that could be fun (sometimes the grammar might not be that of English). I also write poems in Japanese: @cirpoem.bsky.social
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I enjoy reading your calm, thoughtful, and zen-like poems too😊
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Thank you too 😊
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Thanks! I didn't realize it before but yeah, it does go well with the rhythm of hopscotch! 😊
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Thank you so much for reading all my work!
I am glad to hear that😊
I didn't know about Natsuki(DDLC) but I will check it out😊
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Thank you so much for commenting with your wonderful poem! It's beautiful😊
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Thanks a lot 😊
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Thanks! 😆
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Thanks! 😊
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Thanks again😊
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Thanks😊
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Thank you so much, much, much😆
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I couldn't write much this week in English😥
I will try to write more often. Thanks!!
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Thank you so much again for your encouraging words!! 😆
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That sounds like a great way to teach both standard format and how to develop a unique voice!😊
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Your comments also encouraged me a lot😊 I am more motivated to keep writing! (although I couldn't write much this week because of other busy stuff...)
I also read works of Murakami😊
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Thank you for your encouraging words😊
It is very motivating to hear from a native-speaker like you that what I'm trying to do is not wrong.
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Thank you so much for offering help with my grammar. That's very kind of you! While I strive for grammatical correctness in some poems (though I might make mistakes), others are intentionally unnatural. Some readers might not enjoy broken English, but I use it to distinguish myself from others😊
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Thanks, thanks, thanks😆
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Thanks 😊
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Thanks😊
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Hi 😊
I am not on sub stack
(I just googled to check what that is).
But why?
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Thanks a lot 😊
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Thanks😊
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Buddhism was initially very much influenced by ancient Indian philosophy or religion, so perhaps there are realms of thoughts where both share 😊
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It reflects Buddhist perspective, although I am not a Buddhist😊
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Thanks! 😊
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Thanks a lot! 😊
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Great!😊
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Good for you that you had that chance to learn English in a good circumstance. I love Robert Frost's poems too😊
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It is interesting to hear that one can write a better poem in second language than in native language😆
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Thank you for asking, but I'm not in a position to offer suggestions to you. Your poems already look very good! 😊
I believe you just have to be yourself, different from others. So, in my case, I feel like it's a journey to find myself.
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Hi Angelika😊
I have been writing poems in Japanese and now I am challenging myself to write in English, which I find difficult😆
It is great to hear that you can write different forms of literature in both your native language and English😊
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Thank you😊
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Thank you😊
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Bittersweet memories...
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The music is really cool👍
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I feel the transiency of life😥
Beautiful poem👍