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𝚂𝚌𝚛𝚎𝚎𝚗𝚠𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚎𝚛:
𝙵𝚒𝚗𝚊𝚕𝚒𝚜𝚝 𝚒𝚗 𝚍𝚛𝚊𝚖𝚊, 𝚑𝚘𝚛𝚛𝚘𝚛 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚝𝚑𝚛𝚒𝚕𝚕𝚎𝚛.
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Fun Idea, Leah!
More at richardbeszhak.com
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What a cutie!
Can't pass up a chance to share a pup-pic.
This is Murphy
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I have a copy editor for typos... when I think a script is "done."
For development notes, it's not what I'm after. Some readers like to call them out, and that's fine.
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I thoroughly enjoy buzzing past the cars in the regular lanes.
Sounds like we'll have to trade off sites.
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Every single time I press send!
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I'm down for that as we find more folks here. My Nexus is ready!
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Typically I do a few scenes to intro characters (to myself) then leap to the ending. Then I storyboard to ribbon the rest.
I have character worksheets I use sometimes also.
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Feels right so far 😀
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Quick trip on the Kingston!
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It's very small and quiet with not a ton to do but it is beautiful.
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But there's kittens! 😀
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Been a couple years. I need to get back to the Valley.
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Good to see you here!
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Great food and wine in BC and I'm all in on both!
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I get to BC regularly. Need to head east.
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True.
I'm hoping I learned how to better surround myself. More about "who" and not "how many"
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Another Scottish writer!
Great pic.
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Went to a Twins game a couple years back.
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I lived in the Springs years ago. Love Colorado.
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I have got to get to Scotland.
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Same here. I miss the volume of folks I had there but the vibe here is sooo worth starting again.
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Thank you!!
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My first script was a drama feature with a bit of a Shutter Island vibe.
I opened it not long ago and it is NOT very good.
I still do dramas, thrillers and horror but have added TV pilots and recently did my first adaptation.
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...and we've got to get through the readers to get to the viewers.
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Thanks. That's my inclination as well.
The balance of spoilers being okay for insiders but not in the story is always a pain.
Readers are less patient than viewers 😃
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Agreed. But in the script itself.
I have a character that is a hallucination in a recurring discussion and it's revealed to the audience at the end.
For industry readers should I reveal it up front or leave it as it occurs in the film?
Does a reader want the "direction" or have the film experience?
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You're just trying to start trouble. (Way to go)
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And we haven't even gotten to "Flashbacks!"
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"By page 10 you have to..."
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"Grocery bags have to contain a baguette!"
"No one says goodbye at the end of a phone call!"
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Hopefully. We need the gang to come quabble over sluglines, bolds, commas...
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Murphy usually helps.