😳 That's my thoughts in a nutshell.

The story is ultimately pretty solid, but I would make Micro-Face more of a stealth hero. Less "beaty-up" and more stealth and infiltration. I'd also make the Micro-Mask a collaborative effort of both brothers to make it mean more that he's using it after Jim was murdered.

Tom Wood was a failed inventor. When his brother, Jim, was killed by Big Boston's gangsters, Tom promised to avenge Jim's death so invented a "Micro-Mask" - a full-face mask that contained a built-in microphone (which allowed him to throw and amplify his voice), a hearing amplifier, and x-ray vision

Here's a few of my more recent practice drawings.

In the original, Dr. Jonathan Weir was given a magic purple claw by an African Tribe...For no reason other than him discovering them. In my Reworked version, he stumbled upon a dark ritual held by a group of Dark Mages known as the Mystic Circle, who cursed him to be a living weapon for them.