Is this any good
I wanna commit to finishing it early next year but I keep wanting to let it sit in my head
Critique welcome
I wanna commit to finishing it early next year but I keep wanting to let it sit in my head
Critique welcome
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and also a bit relatable >.>
Way too used to silently sliding out sight unseen to follow the clouds in his imagination.
Being perceived and held to account for where he's leaving to makes him feel like a ghost that's been spotted.
I'm not great at artistic critique, but the art style and characters are sweet, the expressions are great and bring the characters to life, and even though I've never felt anxiety quite like that you made me feel it.
So yes, it is very good! :)
Lookin like he needs some anti-anxiety ear rubs.
(real talk, I love it. I love how relatable the characters are.)
I *think* some of the panels have the ears down or back? But again, it's a sketch, so it'll show up later.
Ears are mood rings for furries!
May I do a voiceover of this?
How would you wanna communicate on it?
I have a VO specific twitter and bsky I'd post to, as well as here, if that's cool
Oh no I like this a lot
Oh God, I said no, but I mean yes, but if I change my answer, is that suspicious? Shit, my re-affirmation sounded weird, now he's DEFINITELY suspicious, how do I make him believe I actually want him to come along with me without him thinking aaaaAAAAA
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Good for them, indeed :)
as the nitty gritty stuff goes, the placement and pacing of the dialogue is solid as are your panel compositions and moment to moment transitions