i don't think reading this to yourself does justice to how bad it is. read it out loud. you'll immediately notice how stilted and uncomfortable the prose is, like someone struggling to articulate an actual thought
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David Klion
Not breaking any new ground here, but my god is Bari a bad writer and thinker
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I also feel like the heel turn into random transphobia to signal was incredibly off, and maybe just intended to say 'hey if you like the last bit, just assume my first point was salient'.
(Heavy-duty math isn't my strong point, I confess - that's why physics isn't for me - but slowing down by reading out loud helps me retain concepts.)
But I won’t read a word until they’ve read it out loud themselves.
malcolm x & emerson are very good examples of brilliant writers who let the spoken aspect shape their sentences and style.
I do this with every single thing I write. And I find pacing while reading out loud helps even more 🤭
I even did it to Andy Ngo and it kept his rotten article out of my section (news--he was multimedia)
-George Orwell
This is like words being thrown at the wall.
shorter her: extremists on both ends are bad but Trans people are ewwww icky.
Have I made myself clear?🤔
This is worse than I can imagine.
Or am I somehow really weird?
* Why?
why
No one is sympathetic to Stalin.
Currently, there is no left wing in America. Most of the democratic party is to the right of Reagan.
I think Big Balls hacked the Gettysburg Address….
I try and read that dreck aloud, I'm gonna start smelling toast.😵💫🥴
Is he really trying to brand Hamas as Nazi's and GOP as the savior?
YO their bullshit gets more and more sickening. This shit needs to stop ASAP. The motherfuckers need a reality check in real-time.
Because that's...so far up in the stupidsphere. SO far.
Her mental gymnastics has horrible form.
Because Jesus was transgender.
Jesus & Elijah returned as women & marry each other. Jesus is female in gender. Elijah is male in gender.
World peace is coming; those that remain live forever.
MAGA are satan worshipers lying on purpose.
And there's all kinds of people that believe the truth.
The gov. even hired people to watch the cameras from when I was at the Dayton shelter.
All the world gov.s already know I am Elijah and so do the fake ministers. I'm sure you have heard this before.
Until then, you need to content yourself with looking at the dumb reasons today's Nazi Confederacy attack transgender with such zeal.
Despite Cis-men engaging in most of the grooming cases.
They know Jesus was transgender. They know Jesus & Elijah returned as women & are about to marry each other.
They know their time left here is almost up. Satan is fuming. World peace is almost here.
So he screwed that up. I couldn't unravel the rest!
And the more out-groups you can hate on, the better received by the audience.
the thinking remains bad.
And this is why, it’s so obvious the need to fight flagrant congestion pricing.
😂😂😂
I cannot follow that, um, sentence (for lack of a better term)
The Nazis
Germany could’ve saved us all the trouble of having to listen to her.
Watching your face mottle in the mirror may not untangle this one.
By Bari Weiss
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Am I successfully following the leaps of metaphorical logic here? Have I had enough coffee? Do I need something stronger?
*Hint: not the rehabilitating Hitler part